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This was very cool, I didn't know what to expect going into it but I was absorbed very quickly. Amazing.
thank you! i'm so happy you enjoyed it! 💖
This is beautiful and haunting and made me have emotions, well done! 🥺
thank you! 💖 i'm happy it made you have emotions 🥹
Jeez, this hit me hard. You did such a wonderful job capturing so many emotions <3
thank you for your kind words! 💖
In a word: wistful. This captures the maelstrom of emotions surrounding breaking things off with a friend perfectly.
thank you! it makes me really happy to hear i managed to convey those feelings! 💖
beautiful! the pacing is sooo clever and i love the way you did the cycling links. feels like a really masterful use of the medium. loved :)
thank you 💖 it was so much fun playing with twine and figuring out how to use even simple coding like the cycling links to work in harmony and enhance the poem's narrative!
it's so bittersweet to love this poem. friendship breakups hurt even more than romantic ones sometimes and i think this just captures it wonderfully.
thank you! that was what i wanted to portray, both a bit the slow decay of a friendship, but mostly how much it can hurt when it does end 💔
I really enjoyed this little poem! I like how you used repetition to emphasize the characters emotions.
thank you! it makes me super happy to hear you enjoyed it! 💖
i cride...
😭 that is the best compliment! 💖
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This was very cool, I didn't know what to expect going into it but I was absorbed very quickly. Amazing.
thank you! i'm so happy you enjoyed it! 💖
This is beautiful and haunting and made me have emotions, well done! 🥺
thank you! 💖 i'm happy it made you have emotions 🥹
Jeez, this hit me hard. You did such a wonderful job capturing so many emotions <3
thank you for your kind words! 💖
In a word: wistful. This captures the maelstrom of emotions surrounding breaking things off with a friend perfectly.
thank you! it makes me really happy to hear i managed to convey those feelings! 💖
beautiful! the pacing is sooo clever and i love the way you did the cycling links. feels like a really masterful use of the medium. loved :)
thank you 💖 it was so much fun playing with twine and figuring out how to use even simple coding like the cycling links to work in harmony and enhance the poem's narrative!
it's so bittersweet to love this poem. friendship breakups hurt even more than romantic ones sometimes and i think this just captures it wonderfully.
thank you! that was what i wanted to portray, both a bit the slow decay of a friendship, but mostly how much it can hurt when it does end 💔
I really enjoyed this little poem! I like how you used repetition to emphasize the characters emotions.
thank you! it makes me super happy to hear you enjoyed it! 💖
i cride...
😭 that is the best compliment! 💖